Scared of the facts

Thanks for reading (: Yeah i'll put more up when it's typed, but that probably won't be for ages!

Okay I'm going to explain the plot more clearly.. Tobey was born in like 1927 HE saw his dad kill his mum when he was 15, he runs away He ...

So this is a few chapters into the story I'm writing, I just wanted to put this up because it's written in a different style than the rest of my ...

Bonjour! It's Beth (: Naylor... Okay i don't really have time for a proper review, but I did really like this piece because of the situation and emotion. yet it ...

This was very descriptive and made me think.. (yes I know the doctor said that was bad for me!) But i agree with maddy.. you lost some of the emotion ...

Ella you smella you really have to post the rest of this soon as you finish it :/ or before! i need to know what happens lol! yeah 'He was ...

I kind of agree it was a bit cliche and the rhyming and rhythm were a bit off, but overall i really thought it used pretty description and was nice ...

Does it have a capo? that's why its not sounding right when I practice it!! lol okay and my brother restrung my guitar for me so we're all go for ...

First posts are fun to review (: Wow. That was really attention grabbing, i really love the way you write! 'I used to look up into the bright blue sky, ...

wow i really like the lyrics there, you could really hear it as a song wow i was plannign a really long and good review but i really have to ...

Then he jerked up, his face the picture of agony. I never before had seen that expression on any face, living or dead, real or fantasy. It was beyond terror. ...

just realised, I've renamed the main characters since posting this, and rewritten this scene... so never mind! Adelaide and Tobey now (:

ahhhh!!!!!!!!!! ellalalala! im scared

ooh i like dirty mirror!!!! thanks! x

I don't want to write a review on this because I'd feel bad saying anything was wrong with it, because nothing was. Truly inspirational x